Firstly the flow of this piece is wonderful, every set of lines goes together and the idea continues fluidly through the whole thing. The rhyme really helps to do this, guiding the reader through the poem. This easy flow also helps it reach a wide audience, as does the simple sentence style and word choice. The content is also very relatable, who hasn't wanted to show someone a hidden part of themselves and have them understand? On this thread, the ending lines really bring the whole piece together. Personally the only 'improvement' I would've made would me to break it into 4 line stanzas, but that's not really necessary. Overall a very fluid and enjoyable read.